this flash/video dawns a question upon me.... who's more immature between those that laugh at simple looking dick jokes or those that make said penis related material? i can't tell and am dumbfounded by that.
cause it sure ain't the symbolic "hate girl". she doesn't say anything, much to my relief. Newgrounds was a wonderfully fun place before 2010 came around..... now, you know what you find.... *sighs*
rigfhly so deserved praise. this is the kind of funny animation i love to watch. hope it pushes you to make a feature length movie in the future! you've done a fantastically good piece of work for someone your age! keep at it!!!
its a nice and cute idea. just a bit too short for my liking because the idea wasn't pushed far enough. but it has a solo duckling so its all ok.
hahahah!!! i can see now what the previous part was about xD and Debbie was great in her soft yet menacing role ^_^
she gotta love her bribery and blackmail money ;P
wished there would've been a french quote in there, would've been soooo hilarious to see what you would have come up with xD oh well.... another time maybe
wow.................. just.......................... wow.................
this is...... dare i say it....? its fucking awesome how the expansion of the world is done and how it works...
epic cliff hanger.... makes me think that the insanity symptom mentioned by the doc is not far from the truth...
there's definetly more to Aiden's memory loss than first expected or thought of... would be nice to get to see Geom's room in a future episode.
there's a few slight ticks in the video, now, i don't know if its production related or the viewer thats causing that... but i DID notice the "translators/transmitors" on the head of Charlie aren't glowing for most of the time they walk on the second floor after the "educational" lapsus on how to use the elevator. my guess is due to the shading it was sorta hard to either notice them not displaying or a simple forgetfulness. either way it doesn't really matter in the story xD
Concerning charlie's thought articulators (that's what the floaty things are called), I had trouble with those because I didn't know how to "bake in" the animation at the time, so every time I opened up Lightwave it "reset" the lights... I had forgotten to re-setup the audio-to-luminosity setting before doing a 40+ hour render, so I decided to let it go and move on. I know how to fix the issue now at least. Learning 3d can frustrate the hell out of you :)
nicely put ;P and i stand corrected, your sense of humor is apparent and unique ;P i love the part with the drunken guy in the bar.
great setting too, i was actually telling myself that you should put more people in scenes but you have quite the script in line. can't wait for the next part of the episode, or the next episode xDp!!!
your work is still just as good as before, but maybe have a bit more music when doing a multi scene sequence and maybe add a sort of "running gag" theme a few notes long. would put some emphasis on the funny things ;P
it has a lot of depth already, now it needs a bit of "stuffing" audio wise.
HOURRAY FOR FURRIES AND SCI-FI!!!
nice setting and use, or lack of bedside manners for the doctor. Reminds me of the EMH in StarTrek: Voyager in its first season. so rigid, so cold and by the book, all protocol and nothing else matters even if the doc unintentionnaly injures the patient.
the more i watch of this serie, the less i feel its like ReBoot ;P its beginning to have its own identity now. i've seen many reviews saying it reminds people of ReBoot, have to admit there is some truth to that BUT, i've watched ReBoot from episode one to season 4 two part movie length episodes and i have to revoke the idea of you styling off of that show.
Your techniques may be similar to an extent but the story telling and environmental feel is very very different and in no way so far have you had any quirky episode filled with gags to change the mood of the season for a moment or throw in a few gags in an episode to releave some of the tension before the "win" scene, or even have clear enemies to fight on a episode by episode basis.
nope! none of it!! not at all!!!
your a very talented author and you deserve credit on your own terms. You've put a lot of effort and time into making this really beautiful work that has such depth and sensitivities and a bunch of in-between characters communication issues with a touch of modern, if not futuristic feel to it.
with a bit of luck and some more of your creative ingenuity, i'm sure you'll make a name for yourself in a matter of time.
i sorta hate myself for saying this but damn i can't deny it, your work, even if limited for now, is friggin BETTER than ReBoot!!!
HOURRAY FOR FURRY AND SCI-FI!!!
I wouldn't say better, just different, and for a different audience, though I do understand why people would make the comparison between this and Starfox/reboot/beast wars/etc. I liked those shows too growing up... in fact I was obsessed with 3d stuff back in the day. The now-crappy 3d animations of the "Johnny Quest" animated series fascinated me in ways you wouldn't believe. Delura is definitely a series not aimed at children or teens, which sets it apart in that aspect. The visual style starts to change noticeably starting with Episode 5.
Thanks so much for your detailed commentary, I really enjoy hearing about what people like best out of our work in addition to advice and constructive criticism. It helps me out a lot more than what most people probably think!
amazing work. i never saw stuff like this outside my head OR Newgrounds ;P
not saying that your ripping off my ideas, just that i REALLY love what you did here, and the sound is very appropriate considering the lore and background you've put into the story.
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